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An American Writer & Essayist's avatar

The black politician gloat over dead white girls is just another that we are on our own. No other race will save us.

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Billy Thistle's avatar

What is mises? All I could find was a law term, an agreed settlement. I suppose that could work given the context, but it's pretty obscure.

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Aodhan MacMhaolain's avatar

https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/mise Yeah, it is obscure and I only know about it from the old writs under the Kings to their earls and lords. I was thinking that it would be relation to how there won't be any justice or comeuppance by law, no writ or disbursement, no recompense.

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BuelahMan's Revolt's avatar

Hello Sir,

I was inspired to use your poem to construct an ai song and I have an idea for a video using it, should you agree. The video will utilize the graphics Lanna showed in her video, interspersed with various personal pics of the lady. Also will have your lyrics go along with the song.

I have three candidates that I particularly like (but should you give me the word, I would delete them and never use them, no offense meant).

1) https://suno.com/s/LZfvFJpSasnMntjP

2) https://suno.com/s/gITmM4hoMaExtC5x

3) https://suno.com/s/JXjEI1aOKZOh9NMU

(Notice that I had to change the spelling of mises to mizes to get correct pronunciation)

Let me know what you think. Great song, imo.

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Aodhan MacMhaolain's avatar

Well, shoot. Never expected to see something like this. I'll DM you. BTW, I thought both the first and second were good, but the third one doesn't do it enough justice.

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BuelahMan's Revolt's avatar

I listed them in order of my preference!

There were actually two more really good ones but mispronounced the mises as missus.

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Aodhan MacMhaolain's avatar

The second one might be my preferred one, but the first is also good.

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